Quiz Reflection

The weekly quiz questions involved the application of grammar and punctuation rules to writing good journalism.

While still challenging I did find the Hicks (2012) chapters and course materials on style and word usage easier to comprehend and intriguing. Although I wasn’t able to get a perfect score, in the end, the quiz questions were still easy to complete and manageable to get 100% on the second attempt.

But completing the quizzes each week I was to learn a value in them to support my learning experience outcome and it was also reinforcing the learning of the basics to media writing.

I feel as though this has improved my writing and reading skills now than when I first started this course.

References

Hicks, Wynford. 2012. English for Journalists: Twentieth Anniversary Edition. New York: Routledge.

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Course Reflection

In partaking in the COMM11007 Media Writing, as one of the core subjects for my degree, I was looking forward to the experience of a new and exciting challenge.

This course helped me gained further development in traditional media writing skills and learned how to apply these to a range of social media platforms. During the course, I also learned to differentiate media genres through the audiences and channel, to select appropriate techniques to produce documents suitable for publication or broadcast in traditional and/or online media.

I have enjoyed the challenges of learning the core basics of media writing, including style, structure, grammar and punctuation of news reporting.

In the end, I’m glad I have continued my stride into the brave new world of social media. The experience has been quite enlightening and I have without a doubt thoroughly enjoyed this course and what it had to offer.

The course did present challenges at times. At some stage, I did struggle with the work load at times, due to the dates on many of my most recent posts.

The course has certainly changed the way I view social media now and fostered a new appreciation for journalism and different types of media.

I like to thank course coordinator, Kate and my course tutor, Kallee for their dedication and support to sponsoring a vibrant and insightful approach to teaching media writing studies, and the fellow students who are also part taking in the course for their comments and support during the course and my peers whose work, comments and successes have been inspirational.

Week 11 – Style

A brief reflection

The last quiz for Media Writing, a couple of errors on my first attempt of this week’s quiz. Once again good reading skills are highlighted in attempting this quiz.

References:

Hicks, W 2013, English for journalists: twentieth anniversary edition, Routledge, Abingdon, Oxon.

Review News Article

Inquiry: Woman stuck under train at the Eagle Junction Train Station, Brisbane‘, published on 10 September 2014

a. What are the problems  with the article?

The headline of the story is too long and with unnecessary information. The word ‘Train’ has been used twice in the headline.

The lead story doesn’t include the 5 W’s and H.

b. Does it meet the guidelines for reporting self-harm?

The article meets the majority of the guidelines for reporting self-harm.

c. Reflections:

Practical: Rewrite Courier-mail article

‘Woman trapped under Brisbane train’

A woman believed to be in her 30 was left in a serious condition after being caught under a train at Eagle Junction railway station just after 12pm on Wednesday.

The woman was freed by emergency services at about 12:55pm.

A Queensland Ambulance Service spokesperson said the woman was left with lower leg injuries and was taken to the Royal Brisbane Hospital.

Rail commuters travelling on Airport and Doomben lines experienced delays of up to 40 minutes following the incident.

Police said the matter was treated as one of self-harm.

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References:

O’Brien, C 2014, ‘Woman stuck under train at Eagle Junction Train Station, Brisbane’, The Courier-Mail, 10 September, viewed 25 September 2016,http://www.couriermail.com.au/news/queensland/woman-stuck-under-train-at-eagle-junction-train-station-brisbane/news-story/3fdffc6978a2cb47b0461d1dbb1177ad

Headline

Media Release ‘FakeComicCon investigates knife fight in Brisbane

  1. Queensland Police Service investigates the incident at FakeComicCon.

Headline shows who is involved, what happened, and where the incident was taken place to capture the audience’s attention.

2. Knife fight leaves two people critically injured.

From the scenario story, Jackie Bloggs’ headline was simple but eye catching and leaves the audience wanting to know more about the story.

3. Knife Fight at FakeComicCon Convention Centre , Brisbane.